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第一部分、四六級作文：英文信函題型作文DIY寫作步驟
要求考生根據提綱寫一封英文書信，如2005年12月六級作文、2005年1月四六級作文、2004年6月四六級作文、2004年1月四級作文。對這類題型，通常分爲5個步驟來寫：
第一段、文章開頭：稱呼
第二段、寒暄語句，引出寫信的目的：
寒暄句＋主題句(注：寒暄句和主題句可以是同一個句子)
第三段、根據提綱擴展主體段落：
主題句＋擴展句1+擴展句2+擴展句3
第四段、表明自己的觀點，並結束書信主體段落
在最後要他談自己的看法
第五段、寒暄句+落款 第二部分、英文信函題型作文DIY寫作範文練習
［實戰演練］
Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicA Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service Campus. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:
假如你是李明，請你就本學校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內容應包括：食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等，可以是表揚，也可以是批評建議，也可以都有。
［DIY寫作模板：架構階段］
第一段：稱呼
Dear Mr. President,
第二段：引出寫信的目的
主題句： This letter comes to you from ____.
擴展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
第三段：對學校食堂正面的看法
主題句：As you know, _____ . But unfortunately, ______.
擴展句：1、___. (舉例)As a result, _____.
2、Besides, ______.
3、And what's more,_____.
第四段：對學校食堂負面的看法
主題句：Some people may argue that ____.
擴展句：1、For instance, ____ and ____.
2、But in my opinon, ______.
第五段：結尾，表明自己看法
結尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.
擴展句：I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks.Li Ming
［DIY寫作模板：填充階段］
第一段：稱呼
Dear Mr. President,
第二段：引出寫信的目的
主題句： This letter comes to you from one of your students.
擴展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
第三段：對學校食堂的看法
主題句：As you know,our students are the main customers of the university canteen. But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.
擴展句：1、The food is not as nutritious as it should be. (舉例)As a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.
2、Besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.
3、And what's more,the fare is also a little higher at university.
第四段：別人對食堂看法
主題句：Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.
擴展句：1、For instance,Ic cardshave taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.
2、But in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
第五段：結尾，表明自己看法
結尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,
擴展句：I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks. 第三部分、範文
Dear Mr. President,
This letter comes to you from one of your students.In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.The food is not as nutritious as it should be. As a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.Besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.And what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.For instance, Ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.But in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.
Thanks.
Your students,
Li Ming
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