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Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses, I」d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. I」d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects I」m learning 7. __________
at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.
【答案解析】
1.把invite改為inviting。現在分詞作定語修飾offer。
2.此行正確。
3.把five-weeks改為five-week。『數詞+連字符號+名詞』作定語,其中的名詞要用單數。
4.把allows改為allow。在助動詞will, would及情態動詞can, may, must等後面,永遠要用動詞原形。
5.把learned改為learning。while learning=while I」m learning。
6.在language前加the。特指英語這種語言。
7.把In改為Of。subjects『科目』,English是其中一個『科目』,表示最高級的比較范圍,若是整體與個別的關系,就用of。指時間、地點范圍,纔用in。
8.去掉me。主語希望自己做某事,直接用hope to do sth,事實上,也不能用hope sb to do sth這一句型。
9.去掉level。這是中文式英語。improve=make…better。
10.把possibly改為possible。as…as possible(盡……)是習語。